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nice work, very dark and sad sounding. the song was laid out well.
not truly my style, i'd most likely progress some hats and claps into the track along with a nice smooth bassline 
overall, it was a different style to me, could be deemed a little "flat" to some, but that's most likely how you intended it to sound.
improvements, since its so different it's hard to think of anything to improve, one thing i could suggest is giving the synths a little more warmth (if that makes any sence).
1 = horrible
10 = amazing
Originality: 8/10
Sound Quality: 7/10
Composition: 6/10
Overall: 7/10
7/10 because its original (to me) and it has a great "sad, lost" feeling to it.
there's my thoughts!
(note: this is my opinion so others might not necessarily share the same point of view!)
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