I miss a lot of atmosphere. The vocals sounds missplaced from time to time, shifting to much in pitch(causing that annoying bassline to jump up and down destroying the beat) and has no real structure. The vocals are too much in focus.
The drums are a bit weak and im ssooo sick of that 909 hihat i'd puke! Add more complexed percs, lfo filtered etc etc...
Overall the distorted synths sounds good!
Go back to the drawing board and take your time to rework the song to get a better flow/groove... the song itself is not a bad idea.
Aug-10-2005 12:44
cistane
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2004
Location: San Diego, United States
very different sound...i find it quite refreshing...nice work
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Aug-11-2005 10:26
sevenseas
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2004
Location: tholen, Netherlands
It's an allright tune, but some note's are a bit off... The vocal is synced good.. but the tune needs a bit more EQ I think. But I do think you could have a second look at the vocals
-Marninx
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