Hello mates. This is my first post in this section. I kinda need some feedback on this track, that I've been working on together with a guy I know. We're pretty happy with the result so far, but remember this is far from finished.

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Thank you

edit: Here's a YSI link! http://s48.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=09JG79YVTERZI2ALMBWBC5E9OB

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Last edited by flamingopikken on Aug-10-2005 at 11:59

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Originally posted by ichiro link not working

Sure it is. Left click on it, scroll down and press 'Free'. After that you need to wait like 20 seconds to get the download link.. Sorry for the unconvinient link, but it works

YSI Link: http://s48.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=09JG79YVTERZI2ALMBWBC5E9OB

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Last edited by flamingopikken on Aug-10-2005 at 12:05

Hi, I've some suggestions: the snare is a bit weak; the second thing is at 1:40, lowering the lead synth with one octave (or use more voices) could give more force to it.. well that's my opinion; overall a nice track with good sound.

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Originally posted by Clockwise Hi, I've some suggestions: the snare is a bit weak; the second thing is at 1:40, lowering the lead synth with one octave (or use more voices) could give more force to it.. well that's my opinion; overall a nice track with good sound.

Okay, thanks for the words. I'll probably up a updated version soon.

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hmm sounds very alice deejay'ish...was that what u were going for? Not saying its a bad track, in fact i like it, but its pretty old school imo. But then again youre not done with it, im curious to see how this one turns out.

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Originally posted by cistane hmm sounds very alice deejay'ish...was that what u were going for? Not saying its a bad track, in fact i like it, but its pretty old school imo. But then again youre not done with it, im curious to see how this one turns out.

I was definetely NOT aiming for that style. Hehe.. Ah, well since this is one of my first 'real' trance attempts I guess it's allright.

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hey dude

I dont like these long delayed crashes ... just take off a bit it
I like the main melody..
well.. will wait for full

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