hey there,

i thought i might check this out. dont take this the wrong way but this does sound like your new to producing... that aint a bad thing. that being said, this track does have potential if you flesh it out a bit more - add some effects, and some other pads and/or synths in order to create more depth.. unless you were going for a minimal quality which is something i personally have grown a respect for in the past year.
as far as producing techniques i can only go so far cuz im not the best producer in the world. but the bass definitely needs to be louder. maybe add a hihat sound on the third step of each beat. you know... kick hihat kick hihat.

as far as melody quality goes, i like it. it sucks at first cuz your dying to make a killer track but you might be limited by the knowledge of some stupid software program. keep at it though. itll pay off in ther end. i dont normally ask people tp do this but, if youd like, youre more than welcome to check out two of my (crappy? )tracks here on TA.

best of luck wtih your work

Last edited by djHollen on Aug-17-2005 at 04:51

i really like the melody on this. i'm new to producing as well so i cant really give u much advice. What i would do to it is add more pads and build the atmosphere more, and work more on the kick and percussion.

For first try is good.Overall is ok.Change hihats and don't let the main melodie at break be so repetitive.Mastering is very good thought
Good luck

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