Got some time of work and will be finishing a few projects off this week

Firstly , its called distant road and i hope you enjoy.

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Last edited by adi_hanson on Aug-04-2009 at 13:52

dont be shy , just because it says trance.

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That's a good attempt What's good is that this track doesn't try to be something that its not. In terms of what could be improved:

The bassline is a bit simple - maybe add a layer or 2 without making it just a simple off-beat bassline.

The breakdown is a bit "thin". Maybe make the pads a bit louder / phatter.

Hopefully, some others can comment as well.

Good work.

Thanks , firstly the point of this track to me was proving that you dont need a complex bassline and heaps of sidechain to make a good tune , it sort of started in the production fourm with a topic about stereo and mono , and i listened to this in mono and stereo , and its sounds similar in both.But i think i will put a little more low end on that pad because i have eq'ed it off a little bit to make it more phatt as you said lol

but im gettin good feedback from this tune on other fourms too and hopefully it will spur me on to leave behind the complex stuff and just focus on simple straight to the point tunes that people like.

cheers for listening

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