Hey Tonks

Very great tune you produced here. Everytime I listen to your last song , it's always better than the previous one, which shows your producing skills evolve.

Nice intro , the first part before the big break (6 first minutes) is very well done , maybe you should have done a shorter version because it's becoming a bit boring in the end.
Great work on the drums too.

I can't really make more specific comments about the tune as I don't produce , but I have the feeling it could be mastered a bit better.

I wouldn't be surprise if a label shows some interest with it.

Thx for sharing it

I'm not so good to give feedback in english , but heres something.

Intro was good I liked it and the low synth sound, nice filttering with it .
Seem you had give it a strong compression, very bouncy.
Atmospheric,calm, bouncy would be the few words to describe it.

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Thanks to you guys for your support

Im actually working on a shorter remix of it,

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Yeah..a shorter remix might be better...with a definite hook coming in earlier.
Quality is definitely there!
The Intro is spot on! This project is a very rich sonic piece! Lots of texture to it and the various percs are a plus! Very tribal and African feel...MISSION ACCOMPLISHED THERE!
At 3:00 it seems you are beginning a very cool departure into the "substance" of the song but it doesn't really materialize. FX and ambient noises are used to great effect...I mean incredibly vast amount of extras throughout...just making it so much fun to listen to!
I suppose its very progressive...it just doesnt seem to build fast enough for me. I would expect a really good hook after 5:00 but there really isn't a hook until 8:00. Its just ambient music really. I cant distinguish any real musical melody line until after 8:00 into it and it isnt really as good a hook as I was expecting given the caliber of production that this track is!!!

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This is a pretty cool tune, like the production on it a lot.

Really nice proggy (but quite trancey and powerful) groove to it, the tribally drums and sounds work perfectly. Breakdowns are really nice.

*Looks for fault or point of criticism*

*Can't find one*

Wicked stuff, keep it up.

8/10

(Scale: 0 = don't bother, 1-3 = needs work, 4-5 = nearly there, 6-8 = releasable, 9-10 = outstanding)

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very nice song, perhaps the best one from you!
I love the percs, they are very rich and groovy.
Keep up the good work, and Florian said, very releasable!

Thanks, i really appreciated your feedback ^^

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really really groovey track with fucking loads going on

love it man, great work

I would agree with whoever said about that organ thing that comes in after the 8 minute mark, either use a different synth or lose it altogether imo!

overall great though, I'll look out for your stuff in future

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as i listen

nice work on the percs, very good quality production.
trippy, nice melodies.

yeah that's a bit long, but there are a lot of ideas, like you could have made 2 tracks instead of 1^^

keep it up.

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really enjoyed this one, the first 6 min are awesome, many fxs and a nice atmosphere. I didnt like the second part that much though mainly because of the melody you introduced in the break and because of the track lenght.
All in all it's great and a shorter remix without that "main" melody would be awesome

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