Hey Trance Addicts. I'm working on a track, and I seem to be stuck in a "producer's block" My creativity is gone! I started this track a while back and just got into it again, an attempt to make a solid uplifting tune. Anways, I really would appretiate comments on this slightly low bit rate not-yet-fully mastered demo. Static Blue and Moonbird (I forget his TA name) are helping me get some stuff straight with this track, and I thank them so much. Also Iron Fist! I know you can help me out!

Cristian Fuentes-Aloe (Demo)
Appx. 4:23 lenght

You send it link:
http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...233RUOSBZU9KDIS


Thanks guys.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

Hey Kris. I believe you need to put more into the build up, let it hit a good uplifting point and then you can unleash that NRG that you want.

BTW if ne one is going to vote for a dj it better be Markus Schulz and we can all forget about Tiesto.

Thanks, Fist, I DID vote for Markus would i be crazy not to?
The build up DOES need something. Hmmmm, we'll let some pros here figure it out

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

hey dude awesome track. i think the energy and melody in this one is awesome. one thing i think could make it better is if u mastered the sounds a little better. If you could work on the sounds and master this to perfection it would be superb.great job...one other thing id work on though is making the bass more deep and powerful

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Thanks for the comments cistane, as I posted earlie, it's still in beta and low sample bit rate, and mastering might not be good at all since it's still in the works, i let creativity work before technics, then I go and polish it. Anyways I do agree with needing a more powerful bassline, and I really wish it would give off more energy :/ lol

Thanks again

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

Kris,you going raf to deepest trancia places...thats cool

Tips:try putting some VST instrument(not a soundfont player),for classic instrument try edirol orchestra....try lower volumes of instruments,and only then put clipper or compressor,try EQ work in master channel.....why I asked you to lower volume of instruments?because your synth with strings overflowing man rhytm part,for club track this is bad(for good strings sound,try to change it with Edirol...),some structure changes and your work from beta reborns into nice flowing trance club track....
and remember:for good mastering all freqs must be at highest level,everything is on one level....

Thanks linkmage, ill keep that in mind
We'll talk some more on it

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY