Hey Steev,

Just listened to your sample and I have to say this does sound very very good. Love the build up, great original build up riffs you use, Superb bass! I am very much anxious to hear how the break will be, you are working towards it very well and when your sample ends is a good place to start the break with a nice new lead melody that fits well in the atmosphere of the build up.

The mastering and sound quality lack clarity but I reckon that you will work on that. You definately need to finish this track, it is very original so far!