Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
The track builds up very nice.. though the snareroll comes up a bit sudden.. the pads sounds very nice god job on that..
you did well on the percussion too.
ah the break.. the "boooms" seem to be missing a bit low frequency.. maybe thats just me..
the snarerolls seem a bit loud now, still sudden when you hit the climax i miss a bit of drive.. but the harmony and the sounds sound right
nice track, could be really good with some work
like takkra said it needs some work on the snare but everything sounds good to me.
nice build ups! theyve got that great suspense w/out overdoing it.
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Sep-14-2005 02:13
Invertika
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Registered: May 2005
Location: Sydney, Australia
This sounds quite good, the synths/melody are nice, except you've used very similar sounds for the long notes and melodies, maybe with different sounds they could complement each other more. Also it sounds to me a litle bit 'raw', or not polished. This could be helped by small editing, some more reverb/background atmosphere and such. With some more polish this will be a great tune
when you hit the climax i miss a bit of drive.. but the harmony and the sounds sound right 
