Please leave constructive feedback. Thanks!

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Artist: david.michael
Title: Kineticism
Length: 6:05 (full)
Filesize: 13.9 MB
Bitrate: 320 kbps
Produced using: FL Studio v4.0, internal plug-ins, V-Station VST

Remixers welcome....

not digg'n that clap at all, way to much "attack" on it and its to loud...doesn't blend with the beat.

nice melody...break sounds a bit muddy at first, then opens up nice.
i like the melody a lot, still not digg'n the clap in there.
maybe some epic huge stings in the build.
Kick in is simple but nice....
good track!
that clap is just kill'n it though, especially that double clap u got go'n.
good work!

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yeah the clap definitely needs work. other than that good track.

I need to agree on the clap Also the kick could be better, I guess it is just a regular fruity kick? You might want to compress it better and then put up the volume a bit as well.

I also want to add that your lead sound is quite original and the notation of that lead as well, only you keep on going with it for way too long without anything extra happening. You could use a nice stringpad going over the lead at a certain point for example.

Overall decent effort!

Thanks very much, all... some good advice in here!!

Anyone else?

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Also the kick could be better, I guess it is just a regular fruity kick?

Yes, it is a regular Fruity kick... in fact, all of the percussion samples in the song are just built-in Fruity samples. I don't have anything else... any suggestions on where to get good samples welcome. Preferably free or cheap, lol

Ok, it seems to be a mastering problem.
The melody is ok, but I don't like the sound you use. Sound too cheap to me.
4:10, he, i like this!
it's ok but i'm not impressed.
6/10

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Ok, it seems to be a mastering problem.

What do you think is wrong with the mastering?