Im unsure of how you do things here, e.g if the tracks need to be complete etc, but i thought id throw this up to get some feedback, still early stages yet.

Luke sykes - mercury


any feedback is greatly appreciated.

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Percussion sounds good, lead melodies are weird though I like it none the less. Really likeing the uplifting pads/synths around 3:45 minutes in. Good amount of change throughout, keeps it fresh, imo. Keep up the good work. I'd say leave it for now, sounds fine to me.
-Alex

Great bass line

The bass drum is too deep.

Percs are mainly tapping sticks. WOuld love more cymbols & high hats. A driving high hat may help.

The rhythm is very distorted. I cant quite catch the whats going on.

The distorted ambience is good.
I like the pads @ 4:00. the atmosphere is erie, yet upligfting.

Good effort. It's a very unique track.

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i actually added all the hats last night. to make them a little more flowing, ill reupload when i have time to finish it, hectic week.

Thanks for the comments.

cheers
luke

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