Hi, this my first tune.

I love uplifting trance.

C & A sample

file: 4mb 3min sample

I appreciate your help plz.

Your first tune? Really? This is a great start!! I mean it! You have a firm grasp of the musical structure and the elements used in a good trance song. Where did you get the sample? I like it but it really REALLY needs some treatment. I like to put it back a bit in the mix by using some reverb...and consider giving it two channels, panned about 25% to the left for one channel and the other panned the other way. Gives it a bit more presence. The tune is way good!
I noticed that your clap loop is hidden in the mix...or turned way down. Not that the clap needs to be changed but maybe turn it up a tad.


Great for a first effort though... really good!

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please review my latest AMBIENT track HERE.

maybe change the kick a bit? it sounds a little too goa/psyish to me.

Cool track. Nice melody and I really like how it starts with a psy feel. Keep up the good work.
-Alex

Hi,

I have made a lot of changes to track. please can u tell me if this an improvement?


--> c-and-a <--


thank you for your help