beginning sounding pretty solid, nice percs

nice high-bass coming at 30 seconds, i think the subbass is nice but needs more presence and power to it or just another layer, up to you

darkish stuttery synths coming in the buildup about 2:00 i think it needs a bit more drive, maybe try some additionnal percs layers or something.

main melody is quite anthemic, but simple thats why i think it needs a more massive synth to support it and it will work very well !


definitly my favorite track from you uptill now, cool uplifting parts

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The composition blows.

Mastering is ok, main lead is too loud and you can't hear the hats.

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Thanks Jon.. + feedback.. i'll improve it...

n thnx too to alanzo.. its a motivation

cheers!

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nice drive, nice synths in the buildup..

breakdown sound ok, synths sounds good, but the melody u got there seems a bit too random for me, i would make the melody more linear, parts of the melody is cool, but the low end of the tracks lacks a bit..

it got good potential..

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to Subtle.. + feedback again...
yeah i will add some element on the last climax.. thns dude

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Very much love the kick/bassline. Buildup has a nice, strong feel to it.

I felt that the breakdown should've been a bit more emotive. I'm not saying you should drag it on for days like in alot of productions these days, but just that you have this nice epic melody coming out of nowhere, and it all just seems so sudden.

The melody itself is very nice, but I think I agree with whoever said it needs a thicker, more powerful synth supporting it. Not that the one you have now isn't good.

Overall it's very good, and has alot of energy to it.

By the way, did you ever finish altuna?

thnx aquarian..
"but just that you have this nice epic melody coming out of nowhere, and it all just seems so sudden." i think u have the point.. hehe

btw yeah i finished altuna.. it will be release at Trance Tribe soon..

thnx alot man cheers!

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You should add more bass to this track.
I like the gated synths and the riffs.
I don't like the main melody.
Imo you shouldn't made something that epic in it.
Also, the track is a bit empty for me.
The pads are ok.

You are starting to repeat youself too much.
Change sound presets.

3/5
Omer.

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Originally posted by DJ Dinz btw yeah i finished altuna.. it will be release at Trance Tribe soon..

Ok drop me a pm as soon as it is!

this sounds wonderfull.. yeah great stuff...

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Originally posted by MrMarcellos this sounds wonderfull.. yeah great stuff...

+1, I liked it too, although you've got lots of epic type stuff going it, still sounds pretty dark to me. You've got some really cool pads and voices in there, too. I'm not really into epic trance much, though I like this darker kind of stuff better.
-Alex