Well I just Started out whit this one a few hours ago.

recorded some vocals, and started to build the tune

I need some feedback Appriciated as always.


this is a very early demo http://s60.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...IE0UBUINPS7LEJ5

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it's standard yet... but i see you're just begun

vocals are nice... the choir sounds a bit fake... i think some tweaking to the synth (do I hear correct it's a hypersonic ? )and in some FX plugins would help

I don't like you panned the snare to the left, please pan it back to the center... it makes me feeling deaf

the effect at 1.45 (and further) is not something i really like... maybe that changes after you EQ'ed everything ?

the ARP which is coming at the end of the sample sounds a little dirty to me... try to make it an octave lower which could take that away


overall: nice ideas for a new tune, keep it up

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Matthew J//Pernophus

Hi,

Intro is cool, the choir is ok, maybes add some stereo. The kick is very weak (master the bass, this may be knocking the top end of the kick flat), that will need alot of tweaking. The percussion is good however you will need more "perc". The arp is to "preset" come up with your own riffs however i like the effect of the second arp. vocals are nice and trancy. Nice stuff here. Agreeing with abover reply good ideas, keep working on this.

Terry

I really enjoyed the intro

Tnx guys some of the best feedback ive ever heard!

Yes the tune is veeryy early i will take care of the dynamics at the end of production. and i will add some more perc to make the tune more alive just as mentioned. yes its a hypersonic, ill change it to the atmosphere vsti. hmm i havent noticed the snare be to the left m8 =) ill take a look at it. I agree the arp sounds bad now when i heard it today, My mistake. Tnx for the great feedback If some one have any more Ideas for how to improve the tune make a noise =)i would be greatful!

/mvz

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i really like the sounds and all! but the vocal when she starts to sing sounds like she's holding her nose, some1 agree on this?

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Dymanic säger:
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no, but seriously, they feel good

I agree my self the reason is its recorded whit a Pc mic very cheap. but it will be recorded properly when i develop this tune.

Tnx for the great feedback once again =)

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