hi,

nice atmosphere in the beginning.

Interesting sounds - however I'm getting distortion on a few of them...

I think that you need to add some pads as the song evolves to help build intensity.

You've got some good ideas, but they would benefit from a bit of polishing..

keep it up
Trev

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Oh dear! Ill check that out.. shouldnt be distorting too badly. The lead sound is deliberately distorted obviously. Nothing else should though. Its not in a finalised state so i'll defo get some nice pads on there. Cheers.