Hey man welcome to TA fourms. I still don't post as much as I do but I try. Anyways your track i think was a little distorted and your kick was too heavy. You also had too many crash's going on. I think you need to slow down with your ideas and try and keep it into the same mood. You have too many things goin on at once. You just need some more practice.

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hi there, Like t valor said: The track is distorted, hell yeah The track needs some structure. i have tje idea that i listen to more then 1 track. I think you have some nice ideas, the part with the guitar is nice. The whole track is very bad mixed so you have to work on a lot of thing.

Keep on making music, you only learn it by doing it to much

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Originally posted by Amfora Keep on making music, you only learn it by doing it to much

what he said
pretty... interesting track you've got. keep it up

Nice ideas, but like they said, you need a little work mixing.
Like the vocals. Way too many cymbals. You have some nice ideas,
it'll just take some more practice to make them awesome.

Nice work for a first (to this site anyway)

Keep it up!

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Thx for the feedback and kind words! This tune isn't the best from the album I think but it was the one we were willing to release before the album is released. Look out for Double Dragon in about 3 weeks. It'll be unleashed here first and will be completely free! Now that can't be bad eh?!