I think this stuff is well done.
The percs are solid and kinda stomping, though maybe you need another layer of driving hihats, because I think the hats dont really "fit" right now.
The balancing of the elements is good, however this is very silent, and I had to turn my speakers up high to hear the tune properly. The saw "lead" is a little too simple and repetitive for my taste.... But I like the vocal sample, its used well.
The breakdown is really awesome, you create a lot of suspense there... very nice.
Good job, keep it up!

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cool track
love the 'open air' feeling it gives

Someone else maybe ???

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I agree, this track could be a bit louder.

Good atmosphere, good energy.

Break feels a bit too long. Epic or uplifting trance has the excuse of building up melodies, but in this case, it just seems to drag on.

I like the lead, but it gets repetitive.

Otherwise it sounds pretty good. It's got potential.

Hey,

Once I turned the volume I started hearing cool things going on in the lower end of your percussion. With some more EQ'ing you can really bring that out more and give the song tons of attitude.

I think the bass needs a low end boost.

The breakdown was alright, I like the way you bring everything back in at once. However, shortly after it starts to feel a bit repetitive.

There are some really solid ideas in this song - you guys are on the right track!

Keep it up,
Trev

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