Hey Amfora,

Just heard your track, you have some nice ideas here. Some pers in your track are sweet. Build up is quite nice. Overall the sound is a bit thin, that is mainly because of the bassline being to thin and simple and the melodies not being in balance volumewise with the percs. You also do not add any percs as the build up goes on, to add some extra energy you could add a few more (hihat riffs, claps) and some fx every 8th or 16th bar.

Your break is nice, the leadsound itself you introduce is original and it totally adds to the track. After hearing the build up I did not expect something as good as that. Also that nice high pad behind the lead sound is fantastic.

If you work more on your bass (try to find a heavier more rolling bass that glues more to the beat) and the way u need to use your percs and melodies volumewise (mixdown needs to be better) the track would sound very cool. The leadsound makes this track intresting enough to listen to.

Keep it up mate!


Nomen Nescio

Well Nomen said most of it, you do have potential in here just some parts are a little empty, your synths sound cool just your melodies are a little basic, but they fit well with each other. The main melody was really nice I liked the mood to it. Your structure is a little different then what i heard a little confusing at times espically the change up then after 16 bars it was the break. But that's ok this song was pretty good to listen to some good synths here and there just needs some more percussion and background effects to make it a little more fuller.

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thnx for the comments., i take them to the final version.

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Originally posted by Nomen Nescio Hey Amfora, Just heard your track, you have some nice ideas here. Some pers in your track are sweet. Build up is quite nice. Overall the sound is a bit thin, that is mainly because of the bassline being to thin and simple and the melodies not being in balance volumewise with the percs. You also do not add any percs as the build up goes on, to add some extra energy you could add a few more (hihat riffs, claps) and some fx every 8th or 16th bar. Your break is nice, the leadsound itself you introduce is original and it totally adds to the track. After hearing the build up I did not expect something as good as that. Also that nice high pad behind the lead sound is fantastic. If you work more on your bass (try to find a heavier more rolling bass that glues more to the beat) and the way u need to use your percs and melodies volumewise (mixdown needs to be better) the track would sound very cool. The leadsound makes this track intresting enough to listen to. Keep it up mate! Nomen Nescio

I concur mate, but overall is going really nice like the vibe .
Kopi =o.

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thnx for the comments

any one else

you know what i think about this mate! i love the pads-part.. just awesome! great melodies! synths are quite good.. just missing a little power in the track. anyway good job so far Johan!

cheers mate,
Renco

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Hi,

I would like to hear this track, but link doesn't work for me. Perhaps it's something wrong with my ISP

Cheers,
Damian

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The link works finen here . Try right mouse click and save target as..... i hope this will help.



greets

i got the new version right here. the basline is better imo and i filled the build up with some extra sounds.

right click-->save target as..

Amfora-Flares

let me know.....

greets