like the buzz till 1:00 min... a good start...

Taking a listen right now...I like the intro. Nice piano sound although I think maybe it should play more in the background. At 1:50 when you start a breakdown, I'm really digging the moving line. Kinda catchy melody you got. During the pad section maybe you should do something to add to the buildup to make it more exciting? I like the flanger effect, but now I feel like it's being used too much heh. Nice buildup for 6:13, the flanger fits that part well. I really like the feel this tune gives. It reminds me almost like The Cynic Project or something from old mp3.com. Good track I like your style and can't wait to hear more from you

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Anyone?

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Tjena

I think it's sounds nice.
This does feel a bit like a backing track though, getting any vocals on top of it? Else it might be nice with a more melodic line?

Anyway, loving those blips, very nice, prolly the thing I like the most about the track. Nice energetic release at 6 min, good stringwork. Good sounds selection. Good mixing and production.

Heja Sverige!

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Originally posted by Drik Tjena I think it's sounds nice. This does feel a bit like a backing track though, getting any vocals on top of it? Else it might be nice with a more melodic line? Anyway, loving those blips, very nice, prolly the thing I like the most about the track. Nice energetic release at 6 min, good stringwork. Good sounds selection. Good mixing and production. Heja Sverige!

Tack så mycket!!

Yeah, I've been thinking about some vocals, and to tell you the truth they might be on it's way!

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Last edited by [Alpha]Dave on Jan-15-2006 at 15:20

Tja!
Du vet redan vad jag tycker, men ändå

It sounds a bit boring until 6:11, when the fat pad cames in!
The phaser effect going on sounds great.
What I can hear you've got no soundeffects. Add some to get it sound more floating and adding some atmosphere.
Drums are great! You could raise the volume on the percussions though..
I like the piano!
The synth that starts at 3:29 is amazing! I like it very much!

Really great track!
Keep it up!

//Alexander

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