This is the second song that I have completed so dont judge too harshly. I need feedback on how it sounds and how to improve upon it, because when you get really deep in production you just cant see all of the options. Oh well. Its just a start so here it is.

Palladio Future

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Intresting melody, I like it

First thing, take away that crash! imo it's very annoying when it hits that often...
At least lower the volume on it.

I like what happends at 0:37.

It's very hard to say what you have to improve. This track is special.
But it sounds good for being your second track, maybe more drums?
Keep it up!

//Alexander

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Originally posted by Speactra Intresting melody, I like it First thing, take away that crash! imo it's very annoying when it hits that often... At least lower the volume on it. I like what happends at 0:37. It's very hard to say what you have to improve. This track is special. But it sounds good for being your second track, maybe more drums? Keep it up! //Alexander

Thanks. I want to add more drums but I have to find out when, cause I could easily over do this song.

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What only one person gonna help me?
If you dont like that one then listen to the one with a different lead!
here it is.
Palladio Future 2

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Is this not considered trance at all because of the guitar? The second one has a synth lead.

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