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AniG
Senior tranceaddict

Registered: Nov 2003
Location: Perth
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Review while listening:
wow, definately an impressive intro, you spent sometime on it lolz :P
0:52 oww yeh, the psy kick & bass
ahh, very nice use of vocals and build up with SFX, nicely done, it really suits the song. I needa get me something like that haha.
1:44 very nice here, exploding with sounds, i like.
2:11 nice chopping filter work there.
2:40 - 2:52 dunno how to explain this part, ill simply put as very nicely done.
2:52 - getting into something even more interesting now
3:20 - really reminds me of some hardtrance elements in here too, makes me like this track more
3:43 - very nice, the filter work reminds me a lot of "mike foyle's - pop it (sample)" that he had a while ago. any inspirations from this ? :P
5:00 nice use of vocals again. lol where those gun shots :O
its starts again.
5:50 - nice synth, it built up into something nice. nice pitching, really brings it alive.
in all nice song. i really like the time and effort spent on this piece. some nice psy trance/elements to listen to. recommended listening heh. its a long song, id have to say, but i dont mind long songs at all.
keep up the good work.
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Dec-04-2005 03:19
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The Drow
Super Programmer
Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Israel
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Dec-04-2005 06:18
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MegaMan
Supreme tranceaddict

Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Toronto/Canada
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i am speechless, this is the best i've heard from you so far, just because the quality of it is so high, everything seems to be in place, each frequency is fully developed yet compliments the others.
really really incredible work m8, this is something i expect to hear in VA albums no joke!
if you will be able to produce tracks like this one in the future, it would definatelly set a new standard, what i mean is that before your tunes were good but still either lacking something or the quality wasnt that good, this track has it all, pure quality and fully developed.
10/10 man, just for the effort that you put in, you can really tell you spent lots of hours doing it and it came out just like you wanted it to be.
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Last edited by MegaMan on Dec-04-2005 at 16:30
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Dec-04-2005 16:19
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Four_On_Four-er
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2004
Location: (Red Wing, USA) & DEEp underground where it's still warm...
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This is righteous. I'm at a loss for words on what to say. I've always been a fan of Cybernetica tracks - minimal and hypnotic ones.
Grimy-nice... nightmarish and technological manifestations of pure mind warping madness. It may sound empty, but that's because the writer of this track wanted you to focus on the things that mattered. One of my favorite listens by this artist yet!
THe synths are crazy as heck and so out there... They bring me to industrial triumphs of alien worlds.
The final goa-psy melody was prolly my favorite section and appropriately built-up to.
Thank you Cybernetica! Definately one of your best.
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Dec-04-2005 16:40
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Frost-RAVEN
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2005
Location: San Francisco
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Well, uh, this is jesus.
I don't know how you did it, but you did something that is truely amazing, this track has lots of, for lack of better words, twisted ass pound enegry. I love it, you will do great things man. Looks like I may have a little compitetion, however working together would be cooler.
So, uh, Ill see you again when you make something awsome.
One tip, try something super differnt next time. Like, oh, heh heh, I dare you to make a psy trance track that is 160 bpm that is in triplets.
Well anyway great track.
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Dec-05-2005 09:03
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Frost-RAVEN
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2005
Location: San Francisco
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Well, uh, this is jesus.
I don't know how you did it, but you did something that is truely amazing, this track has lots of, for lack of better words, twisted ass pound enegry. I love it, you will do great things man. Looks like I may have a little compitetion, however working together would be cooler.
So, uh, Ill see you again when you make something awsome.
One tip, try something super differnt next time. Like, oh, heh heh, I dare you to make a psy trance track that is 160 bpm that is in triplets.
Well anyway great track.
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Check out my latest releases, progressive and psychedelic.
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Dec-05-2005 09:03
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The Drow
Super Programmer
Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Israel
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Awsome intro.
The sub is nice.
The kick off isn't good, you should add more percs into it.
I excpected a kick, ohaihat, clap/snare and something that will roll the track.
Vocals are awsome.
1:41 woot nice.
Nice distorded fx after it.
The sub is not driving enough.
Add an extra bass layer.
Nice bass change and good phasered choirs in 2:53.
I hear a snare but it's not powerful enough.
Make it louder.
Good fxes.
Dude this is the best fx work that I've heard from you.
Nice gated melody.
Vocals again.
Maybe this time auto-tune "my visionary" in the vocals.
It can add a really cool fx.
OMG nice riff.
But you should bang more after the roll. Again this shows on some lack of drive.
Good outro.
I'd add only "visionary" from the vocals, and gate the shit out of it. Also use panning, the glitch vst ect.
Just at the end.
How did you get the vocals?
In sum, here are the week points of the track:
1) You need more rythem percs
2) You need much more drive in the main parts and in the kick off. percs will help but you should add something else. some big-ass riff that will make your head move right from the begining. Maybe a oldschool 303 (use audiorealisem bassline).
3) You need another bass layer. This time make it rolling. Just a tad resoish (maybe use something original like sqaures instead of saws, It'll fit)
4) You need just a bit more athmospheric elements. Play more with the vocals, I suggessted some ideas above. More white noises with big reverbs on the back of the track. You need the atmosphere a bit darker.
And the good points of the track:
1) FX work is really fucking amazing.
2) Intro is creepy
3) Atmosphere is wicked (As I said you need to make it a bit darker).
4) Great vocal work
8/10 for me.
It's not perfect but it has signing potential if you'll work more on it.
Omer.
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