hey guys.

here is my latest track. using elements from earlier work and taking into consideration some of the great feedback i got on my last track.- mainly with percussion..

its called Richard Gale - 'Phobos anomaly' (deep version)

very dark and deep utilising my usual pad style.

i just learned how to control soft synths using cubase so some of the sounds are more powerful than on my earlier work.

on the website @ richardgalemusic.co.uk

enjoy!

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Last edited by richg101 on Nov-10-2005 at 17:47

Very nice, i dunno bout that 0:45 pad, maybe make it a little cleaner? but still works well none the less

maybe a better quality file? wouldnt mind putting this on cd!

lovin' it

hey project7.

cheers for the reply. im glad you enjoyed! the pad is a bit dirty but i wanted that kinda effect. im playing around with it tonight so ill see if there are any other options i can come up with.

ill upload a decent version in higher bitrate soon

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downloading now Rick Dogg

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I'm annoyed with myself that I haven't checked your stuff before, this is fantastic mate.
So dark and deep (like you say ...and that break is excellent...the whispers are very chilling, and that rasping pad makes the atmosphere, you use some FX really well too. I can hear the atmosphere in this one a lot. I like the progression in the song too.
Some criticisms:

Perhaps you could do with another bass sound to go with the pad, something subtle to compliment it. Maybe a sort of 'hook' to go with the haunting choir pads too.

Nice name for the track too - is it anything to do with the doom/quake 3 games?
Anyway - excellent stuff.

Oh - and I want a higher quality bitrate please!

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hey ricky!

great to here a review from such a distiguished gent as yourself

anyways mate.... glad you enjoyed it!

as you wrote the review i just happened to be adding another layer- similar to what you suggested with the bass hook..


im not great at massive buildups but im slowly learning how to put them together. so i try and keep my trax quite progressive at the mo.

i always loved the names for the levels on doom. i think ill attempt a track about an anomaly at 'deimos' next

sorry bout bitrate check you pm's

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nice stuff =)

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hell its working good lol 600kb/s!
sounds like a good mixing intro, pads sound really nice!
1:00 sounds really smooth everything youve got going on, reversed kicks are nice too you choose the kick really good for this track.
your break is beautiful.. the higher note pad has a great harmony with the lower one.. that beepbeepbeep synth with the delay @ 3:06 should be used more often its sounds awesome.. ahh im addicted to that beeper .. the buildup is good man! I think a massivestyle buildup wouldnt really fit the track, really nice and soothing outro, you did a really good job on this, really one of your better tracks,actually this one could be the best !

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Originally posted by Takkra hell its working good lol 600kb/s! sounds like a good mixing intro, pads sound really nice! 1:00 sounds really smooth everything youve got going on, reversed kicks are nice too you choose the kick really good for this track. your break is beautiful.. the higher note pad has a great harmony with the lower one.. that beepbeepbeep synth with the delay @ 3:06 should be used more often its sounds awesome.. ahh im addicted to that beeper .. the buildup is good man! I think a massivestyle buildup wouldnt really fit the track, really nice and soothing outro, you did a really good job on this, really one of your better tracks,actually this one could be the best !

cheers mate

i didnt send you a 600kbps version did i? lol

i thought two hour for upload was a bit long...

anyways thanks for your kind words mate. im glad you liked it.

rich

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any more suggestions?

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