*listening*

The intro builds up allright, I like the sharp sound @ 0:28, tho it's quite reverbed. Maybe too much... And the kick could use more power. I'm @ 1:40, this sounds very good, but I think theres too much reverb here. The breakdown sounds sweet
The main part is smooth, not a big takeoff, but it flowing good, if you know what I mean. Great tune you made there!

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I agree with arctic. The kick is not there enough to give it umph at the beginning. After the breakdown it works pretty well with the other parts. Maybe bring it back in a little earlier. Not much but just slightly. Sounds great man. Love it.

very nice. its actually signing material. u should get this off to a label.

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