Hey guys. Apparently I've neglected to share this track with you even though it was finished all the way back in March. It's got a bit too much bass and a bit too much treble, but hopefully the melodies will make up for that and someone, somewhere will enjoy it!

http://organik.1g.fi/Echano_feat._O..._-_Outsider.mp3

EDIT: As usual I forgot to thank Mr Mystery - without him this track wouldn't exist. Thanks Nik!

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Last edited by [mart] on Nov-19-2005 at 20:07

ah well,

another cool track guys

although, i have to say the bassline is not my cup of tea, and i found the buildup till the first break a bit empty, but the strings and the piano are immense, guys. The second break is beautiful, very very nice as usual.

quite a relaxing track, which i enjoyed to listen to

keep it up!

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Last edited by Mycron on Nov-18-2005 at 21:34

I really do feel like the comedy sidekick these days...

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Not so sure the bongos are working to make this track better; the transitions could be smoother as well.

Nice melodies, and good instrument choice. Most of the sounds themselves in this track are nice and clean, well done.

Hi!
My review will be a bit small, cause I'm not proffessional too
So first I would like to say: melody is VERY nice.. I like the piano and strings. Also mastering sounds fine... Listening to this track is a pleasure for my ears
Now time for bad thigs :
So, I don't like those beats.. I would make more them trancy and deep.
Also, not much fx create tune climate... I wish to fix them too.

In general my grade is 7/10.

Cheers!

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Fat kick, fat bassline, funky percussians and excellent choice of sounds! Those pads in the break are supersweet! Sooo nice chord-changes... And in the second break, when the piano is added, I almost started crying because it was so beautiful... And it sounds kinda sad, imo...

This is one hell of a track! Very solid work!

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Gotta love the club vibe.

Nice chord progression at 2:40, this is where it kicks off for me. Couldn't you guys just start the track here, is it really nescessary with the other intro? You would get people hooked right away starting at this point? Oh well, what do I know

Lovely melodies in this one.

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Hello

Love the groovy intro - and that initial break is excellent, the strings create real emotion, and the melody is unpredictable too. The main breakdown melody, with the piano is very well done too. Superb tune guys

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Love the classical instruments and melody!
This track sounds very professional and emotional, my favorite kinds of -ional!
I love the way the energy shifts throughout the song.
I don't know what you guys are talking about, the beat and bass are perfect for this; but what do I know, I'm just a n00b.

overall awesome work.

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quote:

Originally posted by Mycron i found the buildup till the first break a bit empty,

it's actually the part right after the first breakdown that sounds a bit empty, especially because the pads are so wide and full at the breakdown..

as a whole, this is a gorgeous track.. well done!

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Nice stuff, very clubby from the start like Kevin + Perry style. bass line is bouncy n slightly cheesy but works with the background percussion. nice percussion n kick.

coming into the breakdown, the pads are a bit weary for my liking, nice melody going tho. the kick in doesent seem to do anything, like a lead etc etc...

coming into a second breakdown, buildup is better, nice piano work, the tune is starting to go somewhere now, its as if everything crept up on me . In comes sum synths, yey! lol, amazing stuff now, its all changed and out it goes.

I really like this after a few listens, >>> Moved to music folder, a total keeper.

PM me if u need remixes.

The percs and bass are cool.
2 minutes of nothing but rythem.
sounds like a floorfiller to me.
good pads in the break.
Add some war drums in the break to give some kind of slow rythem to it.
You gotta add something in the middle. It's boring, add some 303s or something that will add groove to the track.
Nice piano in the second break.
Omg nice piano.
nice bells thingy.
Again you don't have anything in the main part.
I also think that the name of the track doesn't fit.

6/10
Omer.

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