intro...
your pads are nice
00:54, i understand the work is in progress, cuz
there is no major break down or anything,
i like how your kick is filtered, it looks
nice on the spectrum n all, the higher end
of the spectrum might need a little boost tho
after a while those pads are getting a little annoying
might wanna filter them out stereo wise...

dude, you have a solid baseline and melody, what you need
is to work on the details, lots of editing is the key
but i like how it goes so far..

also, dont forget the concept of ambience, might wanna add some delays here and there, to make it a little deeper or something, you know like a 3D box? sounds a little dry, but as i said, thats okay, focus on details rather than overall sound.

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