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sorry, but that wind effect seems to kill your track a bit. u might wanna try a smoother, slower sweeping pad to improve flow and tightness of the song. i liked the synths, kinda old skool feeling.

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thanks for the feedback! but i need more

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i have to agree, the wind effect either needs to be turned down or mellowed out. nice main melody, maybe vary the drums a bit for emphasis.

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i say turn down the wind effect like the 2 earlier said and slow it down or drag it out so it's a slightly deeper or longer (but still in synch with the beat). sounds very nice though, good work

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Hey Bidor,

Same here, I think wind effect needs to go, or make it more suttle and reverb it or delay it so it's more of a woooooshh, than a whoosh and less wind sound. uses samples purposely, don't just throw them in there...

Drums, build them up so it creates some drama. For instance first the kick, then the highhat then percs, bassline...etc..you'll notice a big difference just by doing that...

When your main melody comes in, i like that, but then it just disappears without warning. You should've kept it going cause it's the main meat of the song.

Use your volumes accordingly also, the whole song sounds like it 1 volume.

Keep it up

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tnx for the feedback guys! i made an editid mix wich i will put online soon

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