Hello Adam, I love this melody. Everything gels together nicely. Personally, I like a little more bass and bottom to the kick. I think if you are asked to remix something that is doing well, you should get a little cash incentive. You should definitely receive payment if your remix is getting much attention.

-Brandon

The vocals would actually be pretty good if they weren't 10 times louder then the rest of the mix (ooops edit at 3:10 he can't hold key. Sounds bad! .)

Elements of the track (lead, kick, percusion) are quiet basic, and I can't hear a bassline. Percussion: again is lacking. There just isn't enough elements in the track.

I don't think you should be asking for payment in it's current state. Heck, I wouldn't be asking for payment unless the track was making money(ie. signed!).

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Originally posted by Rob The vocals would actually be pretty good if they weren't 10 times louder then the rest of the mix

I actually fixed that before but I guess I uploaded the wrong version. I realized the same thing.

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Originally posted by Rob Heck, I wouldn't be asking for payment unless the track was making money(ie. signed!).

Yeah, no shit. The thing is, he is gonna make money off it, because hes putting out a single with this on it. He's got his own label.

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listening,

nice kick, bit bassy on the edeges... percussion starting to build in is good. synth work seems to be nice in the build. IMO you need to change the bass, im not a fan of sub stuff. maybes more percussion in the main build, percs, 1/4 hats etc etc.

Ah, vox... nice, a bit too loud and dry, delay and reverb effects have missed a good opportunity there. Luvin the main pitch bended synth, i really like that, very 1999 trance. The melody is great im liking that alot.

The main things i would do:

+ More Percussion
+ More Effects
+ Change Bass / Layer Bass

Great stuff, keep it up mate.

Thanks Terry, I appreciate those kind of comments. Ahem, Rob I may have made mistakes, but I didnt come to this forum for rude criticism. Anyway, I've re-uploaded a version of the track with better levels on vocals. So anyone else reviewing this, thats what you'll be hearing. Edited link is in the original post.

- Adam

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Originally posted by slyfoxark Thanks Terry, I appreciate those kind of comments. Ahem, Rob I may have made mistakes, but I didnt come to this forum for rude criticism. Anyway, I've re-uploaded a version of the track with better levels on vocals. So anyone else reviewing this, thats what you'll be hearing. Edited link is in the original post. - Adam

dont rush it tho, its a suggestion / ammendement. finish the track more then reupload. take your time mate