Ok.
Nothing wrong with the ideas, but it needs something that can take the lead. I'm missing something.
I think that you need more delay on that crashy thing in the break. More delays and reverbs on the most things actually.
Hehe. I recognize that vocal. But from where? Ahh. I remember, Ibiza Ejay, right?
The track was a bit short. Suddenly it just ended.
You need to work more on this one imo. Work more with the kick & drums.
They don't sound so good. Kind of fruity
Give the track more elements too, more synths & effects.
Ahh. I remember, Ibiza Ejay, right? 
