your right, this is amateur music, tho im not sure its at its finest... sounds technoish and very minimal. by the end it gets a bit better, but in the begining its super repetitive, and very cliche minimal with not to many interesting sounds... i suggest using some wacked out original instrumentations for your rythmic section if you plan on working on this anymore, if not then i guess its your form of artistic expresion and all the power to ya...
tho its not my style, thanks for sharing