Hi! First of all. Happy new year and the second, I did just use 2 houres.. so be gentle with me
Hear and tell me what you think! It`s a nice melodie trance track. emotional
and I hope this year will be better for the children who dont got all of that cool stuff we got! think about it.... in that case, I will dedicate this song to the poor children, and those children who get sold to the market of trade!
Intro is really great. Bassline sounds good, nice sounds. The track is indeed very emotional (that's how i like it ). Nice melody starting from 5:00. Maybe you use that pad (or whatever you call it) a bit to often, but that's the only bad comment i can come up with. Good work
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Jan-11-2006 12:14
funkysouls
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Mumbai, India
hmm..!!
very good Intro
nice beats
good driving and excellent breakdown!!
wat all u used..??
Jan-11-2006 12:52
wavydalker
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2005
Location: Aylesbury
I Have to say....well.....AWESOME TRACK. I love the emotion in this track. Thae strings and pads are a different class. If I had one dodgy comment to make, even though I dont want to because the rest of the track is so good, would be the tripling up on the hats. Other than that mate....excellent work
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Jan-11-2006 13:07
Rayan
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Oslo
hehe.. wavydalker: I was thinkig before I upload it " should I remove the tripple hats, but! hmm... Thats what they dont like!" but after a while i listened to it, its feels like it have to be there.
hmm. I see what you meen about the pads Bl@ckOut. And, yeah. its only 2 houres. its tru
and thanks to all of the other ones
Jan-11-2006 15:00
Tygon
Tech-YES
Registered: Feb 2002
Location: K-Dub, Canada
Well done man! The break sounds like a movie soundtrack or something.. really beautiful.
I'd like to hear more drive to the kick... more of a deep punch....
overall, great flow, excellent sound balance....
however, what's going on at 7:20? sounds like you're playing some percussion lines over top on a cdj or something... and then you rewind it? doesn't sound like it belongs in the song... like it wasn't sequenced in the track.
Meh...
Great job overall...
Jan-11-2006 16:49
Rayan
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Oslo
Tygon: hehe.. I see what you mean, well. Ryan wants to try something new, then I use the osc, and have a lots of funn in the sequencer.
So, all of that is sequenced in my sequencer. But I see what you mean about it! I didn`t want to just fade/filter the hihats away on a useal boring way. So i like I said, Crazy with tha osciliator:P
and the same did I with the bass & kick! and that comes out on a good way (I think). So... Thanks for your opinion on the kick and that it needs more deep punch
Jan-11-2006 18:15
iloop
one love.
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: smalltown BC
intro is a bit long, but definately great, love the pitchbend and attention to little details in the rythmic department. The break sounds like a repeat of the intro with some mild piano, but is still good. I like the melodic lines/progressions and that main melody is tops, just like always. I agree about the hi percs during the main melodic sections are sounding a bit out of the mix and are drawing too much attention... use eq and maybe cut those hi's down a bit or turn their vol down.
thanks for sharing... exellent outro w/ bass... wicked fun on that, would love to see the rsn
and the second, I did just use 2 houres.. so be gentle with me
especially the part just after 5:00
). Nice melody starting from 5:00. Maybe you use that pad (or whatever you call it) a bit to often, but that's the only bad comment i can come up with. Good work 
