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The bassline could use some more variation, and maybe some more percussion. Same for the break. The break is pretty long, that 's not a problem on one condition: that you use more sounds and make sure it's not to "monotone". I like the idea for the main melody, but you should make it "swing" more. Add more percussion and a pad or something. Keep working on it, good luck 
btw, with what did you create that bass sound in the bassline?
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