Hey guys. I've started a new track and I'm not totally sure where it's going to go. I have some ideas in mind, but I'm just wondering what my fellow TAers are thinking on it . Throw out some ideas and we'll see where it goes. I have two versions of this song. One has the piano on C6+ and the second version has it on C5+. Give me your thoughts.

Version 1: http://s49.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...GR1OKOGHAFU7YZ3
Version 2: http://s49.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...U83I7GP0B26BQ3E

Hey nice to see you.

Version 1&2 : Great work. I like the percs. When the piano comes in, It really tears apart the general feel, but it healed really quick. Nice job on that, I like the synths. Finish it!

I like your stuff man

-William

Do you think I should take out the piano at that part? Maybe wait and do something else? Keep the ideas coming and thanks Bassaka

You don't have to take them out, they're nice. If you keep them, soften them up, give em a nice reverb, and spacey effect.

William

Anyone have any other ideas?

Damn!

Guys guys guys, it's not the octave that's wrong it's the whole key. It sounds horrible!

If you are going to use the piano in this track then I think that the '6' is the better option but get it in key otherwise it's just going to suck whatever octave you use.

5th or 6th Octave it's your choice but they key you are looking for is not C.

Cheers
Karl

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Yup

Well you are right about that...I knew that but I thought it would fit for some reason. I guess I'll change it back to the key of F.

the piano is not in the same key as the song...go only octaves or you'll ruin the song. It's great by itself but the piano just doesnt' match the song

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oh, that piano is totally out of place. percussion is weak too.

check out the sample in my sig pls even if it's a guitar in stead of a piano.

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So I decided the piano was ugly at that point but for some reason I can't seem to drop anymore ideas on this track. I don't know where to go with it. I mean the melodies are alright, but my buildup section I feel is lacking and so is the intro. I dunno tell me if you guys got any ideas. Here goes the clip: http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...9U3AYO5VUK4WOFE

No one wants to reply? Well I got a different version anyways...here goes the updated version I started up last night.

http://s37.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...W81ETBGGD6Q90JJ