What do you think? What can i do to improve it?

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http://hem.bredband.net/b537501/p_l...eme-preview.mp3

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hey expanded,

wuts up... this track is nice.

i guess it could be categorized as prog trance? i dunno... i like the pads and synths u used tho. very ethereal feeling. percussion is cool as well.

i'm not sure exactly what changes u could make to the track.... but if anything, would u be able to make the outro longer? i wouldn't mind throwing another one of your tracks into one my mixes. keep up the good work..

hai lee

and if u dont mind... hit up my track on the forum

Hydro - White Widow

link here

Hey,

Great intro you have here. I like the way it then suddenly goes into an edgier segment. The way it builds up after that is done very nicely indeed. The atmosphere you've created with this one is very nice, some good pads being used.

The break is interesting, not original enough for my liking though, maybe try putting some fx's in there to spice it up a bit, try fiddling with the vocaly sample if thats what it is to give a bit of variation. Only a suggestion on personal taste though.

Overall, a seriously nice piece, I expected the energy to build up a bit more though. Good work, keep it up

ps. feel free to check out 1 of my tracks kicking around the forum at the moment if you wish.

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Originally posted by trancinchink hey expanded, wuts up... this track is nice. i guess it could be categorized as prog trance? i dunno... i like the pads and synths u used tho. very ethereal feeling. percussion is cool as well. i'm not sure exactly what changes u could make to the track.... but if anything, would u be able to make the outro longer? i wouldn't mind throwing another one of your tracks into one my mixes. keep up the good work.. hai lee and if u dont mind... hit up my track on the forum Hydro - White Widow link here

Now... i've extended the outro... i will enjoy hearing it in your set man if it's as good as last

Track is updated!

http://hem.bredband.net/b537501/plur_theme128k.mp3

What do you think?