back again!

for those of you who checked my last sample, this is a continuation of it, yes i'll probably finish this track...

for those who didn't this is a track i'm working on at the moment and i would like your oppinion on it. the clip i posted starts just after the intro.

this will be the main "feel" of the track i think.

btw, since this is gonna be my first track i gues i'll be needing an artist name, right? any suggestions?

a name for the track would be nice too.

sample here

all comments apreciated.

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Last edited by djsphere on Jan-13-2006 at 18:56

Yeah I remember the sample you posted awhile ago and I liked it for the most part. I'm taking a look at your track clip right now. It's more melodic than uplifting, but I like the overall feel of the track. Nothing too special with the percussion pretty much all standard. Maybe use some more variations? Make your bass a little louder I think. I feel there's a little too much repetition with the main melody you're using though. Having a submelody could help out a lot. I love your main synth sound though. This is a pretty good track mate keep up the good work. Drop me a message once you finish it so I can have a listen. Check out my track if you could too

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yeah..i kinda agree on the pecussion.

thx for the relpy.

edit: and check your thread

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tis good mate, like the flow and feel of this track... kind of chillout vibes... agreed with logik on the rythms- needs some more variation in elements used. othewise sounds like a great start

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Originally posted by iloop tis good mate, like the flow and feel of this track... kind of chillout vibes... agreed with logik on the rythms- needs some more variation in elements used. othewise sounds like a great start

glad you like it!

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Hi,
Ur artistic name and track name is very personal thang dude, imo, I could not use an artistic name someone else sugessted me except if it's a nick I gained over the time, ur artistic name it's part of expression , I like Djsphere, why not to keep it?
Now the track:

I concur about the drums, they sound a bit dry, basic, but they do the job pretty good , melodie is a bit repetitive, I concur with dj logik in almost all, but I may add ur sound is ´pretty clean, that's something that took me months to kinda fix lol .
Very good for to be ur first track dude, congratulaitons on that and good luck .
Kopi =o.

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thx kopi

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i did some changes with the sound

sample here

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