Hi,
Very nice track, love the pads, the build up is a bit strange for me, all goes a bit caothic, I personally think that pads, the synth break and the staccato strings have potential for to be an awesome and serious tune.
Sounds perfect for a videogame in the space, or a documentarie about the space, the pad, choirs chord progression is great .
In overall, really glorious tune .
Kopi =o.

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As usual it sounds great. You really have the ability to make it sound so much more than just music!
Nothing really to complain about.
Great track. Keep it up!
//Alex

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The buildup before 1:00 until 1:23 sounds very... strange. It's like there's three different elements being mixed together in different keys. Actually, that pluck sound throughout the song sounds wrong virtually every time it appears before 2:30, you should probably look into that. Nice string buildup around 3:00, very Adagio-esque, then there's that pluck sound again at 4:00 and 4:20. I'm sorry, that sound just sets me off and makes my teeth grate It's completely out of tune compared with the strings going at the same time. Another nice build and resolution at 6:00; it's kind of weird how it seems to switch from major key to minor, however. The pluck almost works at 7:53, but that's because the only other sound is the percussion =\ The ending seems a bit weak, like the train ran out of steam or something. Otherwise a decent track!

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Cool mrlachatte, I feel the whole intro part needs some more work, so I'll check those things out and also I think I will remove the guitar harmonics, works well without them

Plus, this one is probably getting vox on it.

Speactra and Kopi, glad you liked it guys!

I'll bump the thread when I have a new version ready later today

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interesting composition to this track. It has a very uplifting feel, but doesnt rely on the usual build and drop method. Quite a lot of elements and unexpected changes. I particularly like it how there is a huge release at 6 min. Works really well that part.

The acid line you have running through most of the track sounds a little too softwarish to me. It has a slight 303 twang, but isnt quite there. Perhaps a bit mroe distortion and filtering could spice it up. Strings and pads are well done. A bit standard, but they work well in this sort of track.

Much more album trance than dancefloor stuff... nice to hear this style for a change.

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Ok, I've updated the track now, rewritten the intro, changed outro, removed stuff, added stuff etc etc.

Better now?

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I like way more the new version dude , still thinking this could be a massive soundtrack theme or sort of .
Looking forward to the veyr end evrsion, and maybe to do a hans zimmerish remix .
Kopi =o.

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Nice kick and funky bass, effects are good, synths are very nicely filtered and dark(ish). Percussion is good, nice and simple but effective this time. Synth buildup is cool, 303 n stuff works for me... nice buildup, i like...

breakdown, luvley melody, strings n synth intro is cool. I like this. More power in the breakdown and introducing the track sometimes when i listen...

Nice melody overall, ideas are cool too. Moved the music folder. Great stuff. Keep it coming.

Ahh! This sounds much better!
It got more feeling and power now. I really love the way it evolving at 1.24. It sounds better than the previously version.
The overall sound is better now to.
Nice work!
I also seing forward to the final version.

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Hey mate, heard this one on EDMCast 43 and love it. Love your very musical style, it all flows so effortlessly and the vibe is always very uplifting. Almost up there with stuck in a dream Keep it up man, always look forward to hearing your stuff.

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Ah sweet! Nice to know that you guys like the new version better then :P

Thanks so much for checking it out!

Kopi if we get this album moving you know I'll contact you regarding a remix mate, you're a pro musician so I know you could turn it into a nice soundtrack

Thanks Terry, will do hehe.

Hey Pho mo! Thanks a lot mate! I _really_ enjoyed your track (P.E.G - Luminence) on EDMCast 43 and it feels an honor to be on the same show
Funny that though eh? Last time we had our tracks on the same show as well hehe (EDMCast 12 I think)

Cheers guys

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E:mortal ft. Tiff Lacey - Footprints - SOLA, E:mortal ft. Tiff Lacey - Coming Home - SOLA
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