Okay, I don'treally listen to house, but here are my 2 cents.

A track that is almost 8 minutes in lenght. You took your time
Matsumoto. Asian I presume?

Simplistic beats and finger snappings pave a way to a rather ackward melody of flanged pads. I'm not quite a fan of that. And the bass is a bit too low on frequency. The beat that strikes me comes in with the bongos later on into the songs introduction. Rather tribal. But that bass is quite disturbing and to bassy. Could be a flaw on my headphones (Producing Type) After lowering the bass boost on my system, the bass itself becomes bearable and I enjoy the snare work a little later into the track. For a while it remains monotonous and no real hook to grab my attention really comes into play. The shakers are a small treat and the vocals are quite dark. Very heavy atmosphere and quite the experimental sound that is achieved. Although i don't listen to progressive house, this isn't something i'd really listen to. I don't know not quite my sound. The track makes me feel like I have really not gotten anywhere, and there is no real sign of progression, or notable melody. That's just my opinion. Keep at it though

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

thanks a lot for your opinion Kris


tbh i realise that this track isn't as good as it could be, but it's my first one, and hopefully next will be a bit better... i'm gonna remember about your advices

and, about Matsumoto... it's just nick name... i'm full-scale polish

listening,intro is not bad,the pads sounds kinda weack,i like the bass pad and the drums that follow,could fit very well for a suspense scene in a movie,good ideas and track itself is not bad but sounds simplistic right now,aniway is not bad,keep making music.:=)



dont forget also to check my track.
http://s56.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...ZF0RF753PTIKKKZ