intro ; nice sounds. great panning! maybe a different vocal.

clean sounding.

percs are very plain. use something more original and more spacey.

bass is quite fresh sounding. maybe a bit of verb so it fits more. im not sure...

gets a bit repetetive before the break.

break: really nice 4:37 when the kick come back is really nice. it works well.

i think the track is great and clean. play more with verb. definately on your percs. i like the pers now.. they work but could do with some reverb so they sound more open.


nice work.

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Originally posted by richg101 percs are very plain. use something more original and more spacey.

*listening-to-it-again* Yes, you're absolutly right...

The track is finished for about 6 months. I don't think I'm going to work on it again. But thanks for the tip - I will consider it for future trance tracks.

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i think the track is great and clean. play more with verb. definately on your percs. i like the pers now.. they work but could do with some reverb so they sound more open.

Thank you very much for your feedback. It's very useful.