your right abuot the bass, its nice, wood knocks are good 2, i use um a lot. i like the way you've done the bass pattern, ill have 2 remember it. its quite intrecut and detailed, not often can you always here that in a tune, good job, i cant help thinking that it needs a pad running through the last run....ahh there it is, looks like im eating my words now. i love the piano and the synths all works together well, the brakebeats different, that piano riffs well nice....yah when it kicks off both times coming out of the braker it dose in my opinion need a padd running in with it. all over though, nice track, i'll ave to give it 8 outa 10. keep it up.

your verdict on mine? ps if you want to join in on the over nighter, then get your fastly made tune in quick. just drop it in to the thread started by me, named over nighter results.

fell free to listen to my over nighter and drop me a reply.
thanx best wishes, hardbeats100

Theres a good sense of energy to this track. Percussion and the hihat patterns drive the track along pretty well.

The melody isn't bad although the patch itself could do with being layered up or something. Actually it sounds like its too far back in the mix, so maybe some more compression could bring it forward.

I like the overdriving of the bass at the end of the track. Not sure if its intentional since its really obvious when all the levels are up.. lol.. but it sounds pretty nice anyway.

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thanks for the feedback guys, really appreciate the wonderfull comments and am glad you guys dig the elements that make this track what it is. thanks for the suggestions, i'll keep them in mind.

Your bassline and rhytm rocks...man this is something what I didn't hear for along time here..I don't like melo and your Subby bass variation(~1:10 - ~3:17) from 3:17 man this is great...very tripppppppy build up...4:18 something wrong with structure...I like piano melo,but I don't like synth melo,bassline harmony is perfect,but synth disappoints me

great work,but for me there are some discomfort in this track...

9/10 -because rhytm,basslne,piano are great!

thanks for the 9/10 linkmage, i'm sorry you feel that way about the synth- i somehow can't seem to please everyone... tho i will try to come up with some new synths for my new work. I realize the structure is different, and thats the kind of reaction I was hoping for by making the structure such. I hope in the future I can achieve tracks with such rythms and tantilizing synths that will please as well.

thanks for the comments and please keep them comming, it helps global sound grow

Audiojelly and a stream.

well, yea i know what your thinking... but I figure not everyone in the world has enough money to go around buying every single track they like, hell I wish i had the money to buy half of the music i love, but unfortunately it doesnt work that way- i barely have enough money to keep myself alive. Regardless- I feel music should be enjoyed by all, money or no money- though if people trully enjoy my music enough to want to support it and help me keep on creating what we both love- then they will buy my tracks as they have been. I've even sold tracks that i'm giving away as promo copies(infinityloop - the woods).

hope everyone continues to support my music and play it as often as possible

catalin.

Hey,

Nice "talking" synth in the introduction. Spooky pads in the background.
Solid introduction of the saw lead. That lead is damn well done, good sound.
2:00 ... whats this? sounds kinda strange to me what you are doing to the bass there. Detuning is basically a good idea, but IMO it doesnt work that well.
Nice bouncy, techy rythm, however I felt there could be more drive to the track, especially in the main part.
Cool breakbeat then. Completely does it for me
Great melody in this part, liking it much more than the main theme.
Nice build up of your climax. Cool

Mastering is a little hard to comment on since its not the best quality. But from what I hear I can tell its a well mastered track. However it felt kinda... dry to me, dont know why, but maybe you could try to make the sounds work more together as a unity. Might be that its just the lower bitrate.

Anyway, good track. Not completely my personal preference but I can hear this is solid, quality work

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thanks for the detailed feedback cyber, i really appreciate it, and am really happy you like the elements in this track. the detuning bass wasn't 100% what i had in mind but its about 95% and the closest i could get it to sound like what i imagined in my mind.

more feedback would be tops

love'n the rythm and bassline in your track....
oooo, buildup is awsome.
definately a top notch production....looked at a few of your other tunes.
great track!

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i had my head bouncing even when there wasn't a beat boy this is catchy, although most trance is good, finding that super catchy rythm that you have to dance to is kinda hard.

your build up is awesome.

nuff said

you might wanna turn your bass down just a hair (just a suggestion though) it seems like it's dominating everything....

really cool stuff

pretty good, eh?

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