Yay first to give comments.

Ok I'm gonna comment along with the song. Interesting intro. I like the synth going in the beginning. Won't you throw in some extra percussion or some background sound for some filler? The buildup in the beginning with the pads is quite long. Try adding some more percussion. I get the feeling the song is quite thin. Too much high and not enough low. Do you even have a bassline?

It's a good start. Could use some more work on structure and stuff though.

Cheers!

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Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself

very generic sounding. but i duno, i'm only listening to it on laptop speakers so i can only hear the high end...

Yay first to give comments.

Ok I'm gonna comment along with the song. Interesting intro. I like the synth going in the beginning. Won't you throw in some extra percussion or some background sound for some filler? The buildup in the beginning with the pads is quite long. Try adding some more percussion. I get the feeling the song is quite thin. Too much high and not enough low. Do you even have a bassline?

It's a good start. Could use some more work on structure and stuff though.

Cheers!

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Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself

Actually it has no bass line. The song does sound rather thin, when I play around with the EQ for the low end it gets muddy fast. I will play around with the drum though and make it deeper to make up for some low end. Thanks for checking it out and the comments. I`ll post up a new version here if I fixed it. Thanks again!