hey mate.

lush intro! love it

i can hear your m.i.k.e influences loads.

1;40 - the bass synth somes in and i like. but it needs something. mirror it but at an octave lower. then cut all the lows from the one you got at the mo. also build it in in the mini break you have before it appears. and fade it out more aswell. i am envious of your lush atmospheres. they are great.

3.55 is nice but the bassline is not being followed by the new arped crystally sound. they kinda clash. adjust the notation on the arped crystal sounds so they fit, or have them playing without each other...

nice potential and i can tell ill love it when its had some tweekin.

please keep goin till its perfect cos it sounds nice mate

rich

give my latest jose gonzalez rmx a review if u r free mate

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ok cheers rich...this was more of an experimental track,so im not gonna do anything more with it - i just wanted to incorporate that Liberian girl intro into a song and try out a different style - think i'll go back to my more trancy sounding string-led stuff!

..at least its a nice distraction on the album hehe


i'll check out your new mix when i have time mate

//adam

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