i like the track. you seem to know where you want to go with it.

I think there is too much ambience at times which overlaps other parts.

the guitar is interesting but would be nice to change its sound a bit to make it stick out more. maybe somewhat different pattern too.

pretty good transitions and good choice of synths

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well the track is not finished yet.my point posting here was to see if is going somewhere ... thanx anyway for your replay and i'll keep in mind your comments

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