Here is my newest track. Please let me know what you think

Motion Twelve - New Tomorrow


TIA

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I like the sound of your bass. Percussion is nice, but I dont like the instrument on the main melody/lead/thingy. Too noisy, I think a delayed ambient piano would have fitted better. Pads are smooth. You should have introduced a break @ aprox 3:40 and buildt up another melody to make it more interresting.

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thanks for the input
ya, for some reason I was trying to stay away from breaks here to keep the flow going, but, you're right, this might have created monotony.
that hard sound got to my ear and wouldn't get out hehe

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The kick can be a lot stronger so put up the volume and this one needs a nice melody..

ya, seems my kicks always come out quiet.
a melody? that hard sound is the melody hehe but i know what you mean

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bump!

nice percs to start. even nicer bass! oh thats nice

the loud stabbing lead near the beginning is nice but id prefer a wetter sound and lower the level of it. go for subtle. pads/strings work amazing. the mood is great-loads of emotion here which i like. i like hearing a track i can connect with.


3;20 - this is nice overall. i d be happy if it sounded like this all the way through. the stabby lead is def too loud. an i recon a melody variation every now and then, with a note raise in the variation would really work wonders.

wheres the break? put one in. the track needs a nice moving break. even just a part that you take away the beat would work.


a very nice listen. please inform me if you do any more to it cos id like to hear it!

8.5/10 so far.

great work

rich

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thanks for this deep review, greatly appreciated
more reviews welcome

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