sounds are a bit too strict...maybe some elements must be more gentle
Break is well done...nice harmony and atmosphere...from there everything is very cathcy...maybe after 4:10 going up for climax need bigger instruments variety.(sory for my bad grammar)....
cool track,but as I said need some searching in timbres.
Birdie

oef the mix down is kinda crap ...a lot of mid/high freqs and lacking a lot of low/mid especially in the kick, not really pleasant to listen to. I agree that its a bit static, the drive and all, some good sounds. Your kick is drowning. I like how the break kicks in with that man choir, but it ends to sudden (the choir) the other pads are way too thin. The saw synth coming up is ugly (sorry). Melody wise it sounds uninspired...one of wims worst i think.

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Originally posted by Stino oef the mix down is kinda crap ...a lot of mid/high freqs and lacking a lot of low/mid especially in the kick, not really pleasant to listen to. I agree that its a bit static, the drive and all, some good sounds. Your kick is drowning. I like how the break kicks in with that man choir, but it ends to sudden (the choir) the other pads are way too thin. The saw synth coming up is ugly (sorry). Melody wise it sounds uninspired...one of wims worst i think.

Oh please, do not blame Wim for this, as you can see, this is a remix, is my interpretation of the original, and what I took of the original was the main melody only, so if you think the performance of is bad, than is all me, Wim has no blame on this. But anyways some people have liked it some people haven't, but I appreciate your time, so thank you very much.

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This is PURE GOLD!!!
Paulo you have done an AMAZING job once again, I freaking LOVE it!!!!

I'm sooo playing it live.

p.s- u blew my mind with this track

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Your remix has really great moments... i like the intro, the bridge to the the break with the choir, etc. and the break itself!

The saw synth is ok until ~4:20 but then it´s imo too much...

Nice chord progression after 5:00!

Overall i think the sound is a little bit too muddy - some background elements could be less loud/ "softer"...

Cheers
S-Tune

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Thanks S-Tune, taking notes, as well as I took them from you Stino.

Cheers

Gracias parce, espero que la disfrutes.

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Suena chingon wey, y el stino es un pendejo, solo se esta haciendo al chingon asi que ni peles a ese mamon jaja.
Kopi =o.

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Jaja, cada uno tienen sus opiniones, la verdad yo puse esta cancion para compartirla no para que me dieran criticas, pero las acepto igualmente, yo se que a mucha gente le a gustado, asi que no importa. Even Icone himself liked it, so if he is glad I'm glad too, thanks for the feedbcak pals.

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stfu kopi, the fact im dutch doesnt mean i cant read spanish

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