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now it should work

like the melodies....you definitely have some good ideas going here...

definitely need to work on your mixdown....add some audio fx to really bring out the instruments you're using....your pads/synths sound needs to be widened (spread or stereo adjustments) so the listener can feel surrounded by sounds....

maybe mellow out on the bass drum rolls....seems out place... if not that, then maybe add some volume swells, change of the velocities of the hits...but they definitely come in to harsh for your transitions...

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I had a listen to it. You do have some good ideas in there. Not bad for a first newbie. I liked the intro to the track, you used some good sounds.

You could try varying things a little bit more. Its always a good idea to learn your scales, and especially good ofo an idea to learn the piano roll really well.

Automation is another key to cool tracks. There is so much that can be done with control and automation changes.


Well done though.

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