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Argh... that intro i heard over @ trance.nu... hmmm, not nice! Sorry man, but i hate the synth and the melody is kinda boring, but still, V. atmospheric...

Hmmm, okay... nice steady beat... OWCH!!! Man u gotta change the bassline! OUT OF TUNE WITH THE MAIN MELODY! ! Geeez, thats awful...

Hmmm, okay, i'l stop being mean now..

Okay, so its prety well produced and there are sum good ideas but i think u should have spent alot more time on perfecting this!

hmm... out of 10... 4.6

Dont worry wut i say tho, aslong as u are happy with wut u produce then no one can says its not good... if u get me...


[Dan]

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fix up that bassline budy

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thanks for the feedback

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Yes, the bassline has to be fixed. It sounds very out of tune. I also think that it needs some polishing, and continuity (right word?). It feels like it's two different tunes stuck together. But it's good produced and there's some great ideas Just my opinions. Keep up the good work

Peace

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