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The beginning hat-groove was an interesting twist on what's expected. It breaths in a way.
The kick drum and bass elements initially sound very tribal. Then there's this resonance bass. I think you should tone down the resonance and give it more pluck -- even then the bass could sound a tad cheap. I'm not sure I like the bass that much.
I can't say I like the square-ish pad. It sounds a tad cheesy for my tastes.
The progression doesn't seem to lean on anything too logical. Now we have anthem-saws... Why? Where's the bass? Everything else sounded tribal and random intro filler compared to this. At first I thought you were trying to root for something Juno-Reactor-ish, and now I'm not sure at all.
I can't make up my mind, really. I admire some of the individual elements, yes. The intro bass idea before the resonnance could make some very good techno... otherwise, you've got me bamboozled when it comes to comparing this to trance.
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