thanks to all those who gave advice to the previous version of this track! i have made some changes..

*track is extended
*worked on the kick.

to download click *"here"*

comments are always welcome i may eventually sent this track to one of the nightclubs im my hometown to see what they would say...

anyway cheers guys for taking your time to reply! im a man of word so when i say feedback is given in return i will do it asap.

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thx

Hey... sounding definitely better than the last version. Still couple remarks.. The melodies could be still louder and they could have more high frequencies... the drums are distorted occasionally which doesn´t sound good at all. Anyway there´s lots of improvement, good luck with everything!

Cheers, Lakeus

sorry... but! is the volume very to the right?

Well... I`m very in to the melody trance. so this is not my best review on such tracks.. But... some ideas get the sounds clearer out. dont use so much bass, on the bass drop/ rev kick!

overall!
okey..

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Originally posted by Rayan sorry... but! is the volume very to the right? Well... I`m very in to the melody trance. so this is not my best review on such tracks.. But... some ideas get the sounds clearer out. dont use so much bass, on the bass drop/ rev kick! overall! okey..

wow! a review from the famous ryan! lol
thanks mate! i am studying some help files from a new program at the moment so i should have some better songs hopefully in the future...

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wooooow really cool... the bass is pretty distorted, just mix it properly. heh... no offence ry...bidor, don't listen to him... goa is ALL about the bassline..... heh.. my plug... some sweet sounding synths, they are very goa-y... ooh... I love your flunged speech heh... kewwwwl.

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Techy sample is really cool.

It's kinda quiet, which is odd, because it's also clipping a lot.

It seems kinda simple, really. One thing about Goa and Psy is that they're very complex. Then again, this is hardstyle, and that tends to not be a complex genre.

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Originally posted by thoughtlessjex Techy sample is really cool. It's kinda quiet, which is odd, because it's also clipping a lot. It seems kinda simple, really. One thing about Goa and Psy is that they're very complex. Then again, this is hardstyle, and that tends to not be a complex genre.

thanks for the replies guys! appreciate it! i somehow like this comment... i have never heard a goa & hardstyle track before, so i thought yeah why not make one that includes both

thanking you

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Heya,
The mastering on this is not bad. Maybe the kick could get more upfront.
Good percussion, really.
Nice melody in the background, works quite well.
I also think the volume is a little much to the right. Check your panning.
For an overall track, there could maybe some more changes. Another theme maybe?
I dont think this is bad stuff at all, you have indeed improved a lot.
Keep it up!

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Originally posted by cybernetica Heya, The mastering on this is not bad. Maybe the kick could get more upfront. Good percussion, really. Nice melody in the background, works quite well. I also think the volume is a little much to the right. Check your panning. For an overall track, there could maybe some more changes. Another theme maybe? I dont think this is bad stuff at all, you have indeed improved a lot. Keep it up!

hey cyber,

thanks for the nice comment! i might sometime create a more updated version of this track, another theme? yeah, maybe some horror kinda theme with goa & hardstyle? sounds cool to me... what do you think?

thanks again psy master

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i am going to update the updated song with a new theme, but i need more tips and comments to make this treck superb. thanks for taking your time to review

bidor

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