Hi all,
I began working on this track yesterday.
I'm quite happy with it so far, even though I haven't come so far with it yet. Anyway, I would love to hear your comments on it so far!

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Cheers!

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David Laine / Castra / Semantica
Magic Island / Armada / Perceptive
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Last edited by [Alpha]Dave on Mar-06-2006 at 22:58

wow. pretty damn good if you ask me.

hey [Alpha]Dave,

first of all, thanks for the review on my track

anyway, i listened to your track and its sounding cool so far, i have some suggestions about it, though (if you don't mind): i really like the tb303 kinda thing, it sounding very oldschool in a good way , the kick maybe could have a bit more body, percussion is nice, i can't really hear the open hihat at the end of the buildup, the leadsound is not really my cup of tea, but it still sounding very nice in the track, the bassline is cool, maybe you can add another layer for the midbass to add some even more drive to the track
all in all, the track sounds pretty cool yet, definitely keep working on it, im wondering about the main melody you will introduce later to the track

i hope it helps mate, just my 2 cents!

keep it up!

cheers,

Peter

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xstalkrx: thx!

Mycron: Thx for your feedback! I can agree with most of what you said.
I will try to faten up the bassline and give the kick some more fulness (as you said) cause I made it in my headphones at night, and now this morning when I listend thru the monitors I noticed what you were talking about! As for the main-melody, yeah I will introduce one later on, with a nice break and all

Thx once again for your feedback!

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David Laine / Castra / Semantica
Magic Island / Armada / Perceptive
Website | | Soundcloud