ahh.. a new track.. well.. i did this before Ocean of Life, but now i have finished it..

left click here

dbl - the lightning

please tell me what you think of

cu

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Daniel

dll it.. i`ll give u my opions soon..

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man i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR TRACK IS JUST AMAZING,,BUT YOU MUST CHANGE THE BASS IN THE SYNTHS VERY VERY LOUD,,AND DONT GIVE REVERB TO THE DRUMS,,,I WOULD LIKE TO MAKE A REMIX OF IT,,I REALLY WOULD LIKE TO DO IT,,,CONTACT ME IN THE ICQ MAN

YOUR TRACK RULES

It`s not really my style.. but.. here`s my opinion:

-the intro-synth.. i don`t like it.. it has to be much `phatter`
-the rythm.. thats a nice thing about your track hehe..
-i like that snare roll
-u have to get more `power` in your track.. use more synths.. again.. `phat` synths ofcorz

the track is nice made.. but not really my style

greetz,

DJ Mantis

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thank's DJ Cuttof.. will contact you on ICQ..

i have thought of the power thing and i might do something with more power in my next tune

gotta go now..

cu

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Daniel

the mix is way off, try and not have the same melody through out the song.
the good thing is its a lot different to what everyone els is doing
keep trying

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Originally posted by mantisnl It`s not really my style.. but.. here`s my opinion: -the intro-synth.. i don`t like it.. it has to be much `phatter` -the rythm.. thats a nice thing about your track hehe.. -i like that snare roll -u have to get more `power` in your track.. use more synths.. again.. `phat` synths ofcorz the track is nice made.. but not really my style greetz, DJ Mantis

i'm thinking the same thing.. needs more meat too it.. the synth sound in the beginning was kind of a turn off.. but overall the song is ok.. the rhythm is the strong point IMO