I liked sequence, so i was curious about his one
Intro is very good. That vocal is not bad but it doesn't really fit the track imo. Furthermore i think some extra sounds could be used to bring a bit more variation. But overall, it sounds very nice.
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Mar-09-2006 15:50
Effero
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2006
Location: Canada
Interesting start, the bass coming in is eerie. The arps sound dissonant but I can hear this was your intention, just adding to the overall ambience of the whole track. Low end has a lot of opportunity to be a strong driving element. It needs some tightening.
The atmosphere in this track is really interesting. I like the the effects used. The end for me was abrupt, is that the file or is it a problem at my end?
Good work, I enjoyed it, keep it up.
Regards
Effero
Mar-09-2006 16:35
Rinster
EDM Addict
Registered: Jan 2006
Location:
thanks guys for the great reviews! i have worked on the track and removed the vocals, i also didnt really liked them i just putted them in the track. the thing with the kicks is being fixed, and the ending is going to be edited aswell. im going to add a lot more fx's in this track with more atmospheric samples. im going to start editing this track again later. i want to thank you all again, and more reviews would be nice as i want this to be a perfect track, cheers!